khabdellah2

I just wanna ask you guys real quick, how do you think is my fan fiction going, do you like it? And if you have any suggestions that I should consider? Your theories? Your observations? 

Walid3177870

Ooooh so mice
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khabdellah2

Thank you sweetie
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Walid3177870

You are gorgeous 
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khabdellah2

I just wanna ask you guys real quick, how do you think is my fan fiction going, do you like it? And if you have any suggestions that I should consider? Your theories? Your observations? 

Walid3177870

Ooooh so mice
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khabdellah2

Thank you sweetie
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Walid3177870

You are gorgeous 
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Naveen_001

Hey man thank you for voting on my story and commenting:)
          "What you think about the story so far?"

Naveen_001

@khabdellah2 yes I would add those
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khabdellah2

@Naveen_001 it's pretty good,but it can be better if you used "these" to write conversations it wouod make it easier to read. 
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