khaiijk67

Hey guys, I recently updated my new novel Burnt, please check it out!

JJGardner1981

I read the first of your short stories. Really good!

JJGardner1981

@khaiijk67 Thank you so much!
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khaiijk67

@JJGardner1981 I really love how you create tension and excitement, overall the prologue is amazing. The only thing I would say would be to change the structure of the story, to include paragraphs. That would make it even better!
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Chiadi_Kobi

khaiijk67

I will! It looks really good!
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