khalila_w

The Duke's Obsession will come to an end tomorrow. Together, we'll bid farewell to Stephen and Caroline's love story, a journey filled with heartbreak, devotion, and unwavering love.
          	
          	Thank you for being part of their story. I hope you'll join me again as we embark on a new journey with another tale waiting to be told.

khalila_w

The Duke's Obsession will come to an end tomorrow. Together, we'll bid farewell to Stephen and Caroline's love story, a journey filled with heartbreak, devotion, and unwavering love.
          
          Thank you for being part of their story. I hope you'll join me again as we embark on a new journey with another tale waiting to be told.

khalila_w

Wow, you're a true historical romance lover! I read Sophie Jordan too, but honestly, her books are a little too steamy for my taste.  I'm also a fan of Virginia Henley. She's an amazing writer, and her books are definitely steamy—sometimes even quite explicit.  I guess my personal taste leans more toward authors like Judith McNaught and Kathryn Le Veque. Their writing feels more elegant, and they don't make the steamy scenes the main focus of the story. So, I'm sorry if my books disappoint you in that regard, but I really appreciate your suggestion. ❤️

khalila_w

Aww, thank you so much for your amazing feedback! I honestly agree with you. I feel like this story still needs a lot of editing and revising. English isn't my first language, so writing those steamy scenes is actually pretty challenging for me.  To be honest, I can't quite imagine or write them as explicitly as you'd probably like. Maybe I've been living the celibate life for way too long... hahaha, just kidding! I might need a little AI assistance for those scenes.
          Seriously though, thank you for sticking with this story from the very beginning. It really means a lot to me. And here's a little spoiler for you... this novel only has four chapters left before it ends. I hope you'll stay until the very last page. ❤️

khalila_w

          
          Hello, readers!
          
          I just posted my new novel, The Devil’s Bride. This story is set in Saint Petersburg, Russia, with a dark world of the Russian Bratva mafia as its backdrop.
          
          It tells the story of Artem Petrov and Anastasia Karpova—two people who are completely different, yet born into the same dangerous world.
          
          Anastasia, or Nastya, is the daughter of a Bratva Pakhan. Her father spent her entire life protecting her from the darkest side of his world, allowing her to grow into someone gentle, religious, and pure.
          
          Artem is the exact opposite. He is a ruthless Pakhan, feared by everyone around him. To his enemies, he is cold and merciless. But when it comes to Nastya… she is his only weakness.
          
          This story is packed with dark romance,  possessive hero, obsession, toxic love, and enemies-to-lovers tension.
          
          Hope you enjoy reading it ❤️
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/412765935

khalila_w

          
          Hi, readers…
          I’ve just published my new novel, The Duke’s Obsession.
          
          This story is set in the Victorian era, where status and society scandals could destroy a person’s reputation—especially a woman’s.
          
          The story follows Stephen Devereux, the Duke of Lincoln, and Lady Caroline Hastings, Lady Hastings.
          
          This novel is about forbidden love, obsession, heartbreak, loss, and two deeply wounded souls trying to navigate their pain.
          
          I hope you’ll enjoy this journey. ❤️
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/411894756

tragicundead

@khalila_w   I was trying to refer you to Sophie Jordan not Joran  but anybody that is top in this genre that has these sex  life altering  scenes down will help you  not gloss over that. It is very very important.  and I ... here amd just happy to be  talking to you a future  bestseller  of all time  in this genre and I  just am humbled you even will talk with me or  even accept  what I think is superb and what   needs  a small tiny editing and you are gold. I love you and you damn better put me in you  published  bestseller as an inspiration.  Love you so much and ty
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tragicundead

@khalila_w   I need that duke happy, I need a heir or three, and I need London  accepting  Caroline and  a steamy steamy sex  that won't ever part their souls for the entire long long marriage. 
              And I ty so much for replying to me.  I know this genre inside out and you have a hit here.  Really, I am 66.  You think I've not read this mess since  starting with gothic novels  and going  forward into more sexy  intimate  writings?  Oh hell no. I started reading at 10 with Mary Stuart    or Steward,  lol  can't remember this was back in the  late 60's and 70's.   I know good writing when I see it and you girl have it.     Keep your confidence up... learn those sexy intimate  details to make the story  a highlight. Those are very important with the emotions of these  charachters you have created.  They deserve it.      Refer if you must to   Sophie Joran on  how to write those scenes.  
            But you have a career in this genre and  you can make a jackpot.  I have not doubt,   edit out  the repetion of  feelings over and over and make your sex scenes steam,, I mean  put your soul into that for these characters.  Nobody is going to be embarassed, this is accepted into this genre.  Also commend you on English not being your first  language.  OMG that makes  you even more gifted.  Keep on  don't stop.. I am a fan forever.
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tragicundead

@khalila_w   ty so much,, it was a pleasure to read it and you should really publish this.  I can if you want or not want a  bit of help on some slow parts but overall it's a  hit that can be published with some editing that is small.  It's beauitfully written but does go over parts overly too much and less steamy intimate parts.  That is all that needs fixing.  Just not repeating some bits so much and give a more steamy sexy  interlude and you my dear have a   BESTSELLER on your hands.  I've been reading this mess before I was ever married   and  I know most plots/tropes etc but this one is  better than the ones published.  Ty for a great story, great writing and a creative mind!
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