This is my first time letting anyone see what I write. I would like to get feed back on how to make it better. Be brutal, honest I don't mind. I really want you to tell me what you think.
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kiah2497
Aug 27, 2015 11:49PM
OK, guys, I'm working on a new story. Its about a girl who gets pregnant and how it changes her life. I will post 3 chapters. But also, I want to actually finish the story before I post it completely...View all Conversations
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The Best Things That Ever Happened...
Emily is fresh out of High school. Planning on college, and starting an internship that may lead to a career...