I’m at a loss of words about how beautifully written your poetry book, Painfully Beautiful is. The way in which you phrase your words proves that you’re a worthy poet. Evidently, you’ve gone liberal when it came to grammar rules. Making the lines flow like run-one worked well. As a poet for two years, I can say poetry is hard to master.
Your poetry tends to be really long. Have you ever considered being a spoken word poet? I believe you have the potential.