Nabasa ko na bhe...
Ganito siguro advice ko lang stick to one language kung tagalog, tagalog english kung english...or pede nmn mix pero mild lang...na gets mo ba? Sorry mejo magulo ako...
Ahmm...sa summary mo din mas ok if pure tagalog nalang..ska make it short para my mysterious effect..you can ask your friend in proofreading before publishing it...it will help! Goodluck in your writing career!