kiki200411

Please read this and tell me what you think? https://www.wattpad.com/story/152167106

AbbyBabble

I like the hook! She sounds like a bad-ass.
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AbbyBabble

Thanks for your votes on "City of Slaves"! If you get further in, I'd love to know what you think. There are aliens and it goes off world... a bit of an awkward transition, from New Hampshire to New GoodLife WaterGarden City, but I couldn't think of any other way to do it.