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Hello, I enjoyed your creativity and I'm glad I came across this book. This is not to put you down but as I writer, I look forward to people telling me about the errors in my work. Except the tenses mix up and a little hick-ups in your sentences, you did good for a 12 year old. Keep up the good work 

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Thank you so much for the vote! Much appreciated :)

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Also thanks for fallowing me also I like your book so just keep on writing because it is amazing

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