UrbanRoyalty
Thank your for your comments on my chapter! i really appreciate it! Maybe i should go and re-write the whole story. it was in truth side tracked and done in a rush. i was really trying to hint what happened between the ex [Jacklynn] & the boyfriend [Derrick]. i was planning to have given it away at the end but i decided to wait until i finish number 2. But anywy, THANK YOU SO MUCH for you comment! i'll try to do better the next time. =)