tiredgarbagerat
Word of advice (I’m no professional writer) but try spacing out the chapters more. Like don’t rush it all in one chapter at once. I love the concept of your book and it is really unique and I can see it going really far. Other than that it is really good!
kimberramsey
Thank you for the advice, but I’m going off of research I’ve done that most chapters in novels have at least 2500 words. I appreciate any critique though and am glad you enjoy the concept.