I need some help. I'm editing an old story and I need a help from everyone especially for those who writes.
Please read https://my.w.tt/GSdNw1KRCR
And also after reading it, please chat me and inform me of things I should improve so that my stories would be pleasing to the audiences
Thank you!
Thank you for following! Sana mabasa mo new story ko na:
A BEAUTIFUL SOUL
Monica died and she doesn't deserve a second chance pero pinagbigyan siya by putting her soul accidentally to someone else body-- A beautiful body like Anna. With her badass attitude, will she be able to mimic the owner's gesture just to stay forever in her body? But with Gab's eyes, will she be able to withstand everything that comes along her way?
https://my.w.tt/3WQFWndejR