ocesasam

Hi dear, I apologise If this message is disturbing you in anyway, I just want to let you know that I'm currently writing Btsfanfics and I would love it if you could check them out whenever you're free, i would really appreciate your honest feedback, thank you (⁠✿⁠^⁠‿⁠^⁠).
          this is one of them..
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/359001181?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=ocesasam

ocesasam

@kimmisso1309 thank you very much for your feedback dear, I really appreciate it, I'll try to work on the options (⁠✿⁠^⁠‿⁠^⁠), I'm glad you liked the story plot, thank you again! ❤️
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kimmisso1309

@ocesasam  well hii again ik that was quick but I just read 2 of ur stories and so far the plot is pretty good, I also like the writing style and the grammar framing is perfect as well, the only thing I found disruptive was the image options uk? I mean I really like that ur giving an idea of the dresses and the cars but 4 options for each us slightly excessive and uk kinna disturbs the story. But other than that I like it a lot!! I followed and will wait for updates ❤️
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kimmisso1309

@ocesasam  heyy no that's no problem, I'd love to give it a read! I'll also let you know my feedback ,Much love <3
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