LovelyBeatle

Hey @kimnovaliv! I am currently reading your story 'True Beauty chinese version' and I LOVE IT SO MUCH. I love how you are able to catch the reader's attention, you have such good writing skills! I wrote a love story about an impossible love between two soulmates on a mysterious and beautiful island. I would be so happy if you could honestly review it and give me some writing tips! Thank you so much!

kimnovaliv

@LovelyBeatle her are some writing tips
             1. It's good to remember your characters name even if it's made up or no,t because in some story I see people forgetting their name and it's pretty confusing.
            
            2. It's good to start with a plan before writing a story because you might start like with A story that has A different beginning Different middle A different end And that'll be really confusing
            
            3.  It's good to remember what you're going to put on the hashtag and make sure it matches with the story and matches with the description
            
            
            anyways bye love you hope you have a great day >3
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kimnovaliv

Hey @LovelyBeatle I delate, the reason why is I had wanted to make changes. I also realized it didn't really have the emotion i wanted so make a different story, but it will still have the same character but different title and other stuff
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