hi everyone! i hope you enjoy my latest update of my book. when i re-read the old chapters, i realized that i focus more on the dialogues instead of their emotions. this time i tried my best to convey their emotions. i have been drafting for the past few days and it is not easy. i had a hard time and im not satisfied because i feel like my writing is lacking. i appreciate it so much if you vote and leave some comments. it helps me stay motivated to continue my book. feedback is highly appreciated. <3