Note to me: The first ever piece of advise for my writing career from @Zenaria
"@kinjalmcduffie To draw readers in you need ATLEAST two out of these three things. 1) A killer book cover 2) An intriguing description 3) compelling title
After you draw the readers in now, you need to ensure that you keep their interest .. the very few chapters must hook them, very few people will continue to read to see if the story will get interesting.. (with that being said don't change anything about your story unless it is what you want)"