I just realized how bad I was at writing, my grammer was rusty sometimes and I would make a block of words with barely any spacing.
In my absent time I got to know more English ofc, and more writing techniques, though not a lot.
So I tweaked the first two chapters of 'EIGOOH' (short for 'everything is getting out of hand')
It looks cleaner and has fixed sentences so it actually makes sense now, Yipee!!☆