Hey, I saw that you voted for my fanfic and I was wondering if you have any advice for my future chapters. Your stories are amazing! (I'm Natalie's friend btw)
@youstinalab aw haha thank you :) your book is already to a good start but some advice would be to make your future chapters longer, that'd be fine. Also try switching POV's (point of view) to other important characters that'll be in the book. That's really all the advice I have right now so keep doing what you're doing! You're doing a great job so far so yeah :) -kitana