Hello. Thank you for your comment. I read it and understand your point, the thing is it was my first attempt at writing so I guess I was trying to point out the dramatic bits by capitalising them, lol. I will try to edit this book once I finish my other one. I know it may be annoying and I apologise as it's difficult for me to see the finished chapter because I have to rely on my computer and another person who reads the finished chapter and okays it before I publish. So please don't be disheartened by the capital letters and please keep reading the book. Thank you. Xx
