Ok I read the first chapter. 1st I love the story line I like the idea I really do but you gotta polish it try and re edit it and there is some grammar issues but I'm not gonna kill you for it because I can't say nothing I suck at grammar but yeah I like it but its a bit confusing so polish it / make it better k! :3
Hi, I'm back. I read your story, SECRET OF ROZA, and left a comment for you. Don't forget to take a peek at mine and let me know what you think.
Peace, BCG