My sis was reading parts of my story for grammar and she was complainig how bad it is. Yes i know how bad it is bur i dont care too much, i only care about the story. Yes grammar and punctuation is important but I'll read anything as long as it has a good story.
Uhhhh i cant write atm, my laptops dead and my chargers briken and im moving today and soon i will be back at school . I will still try to write the third chapter but it will take a while... as with everything i do... i really want to quit school.....