Addison

Thanks for following. I hope you enjoyed my story!

@MiaTayn huh, I wonder how that happened. It wasnt like that earlier.. Thanks for the tip! I'll fix it soon. :)

Yes, I believe this book has potential, oh and you are changing your title of the book right? Because it says chapter one on it.

@MiaTayn Ok, so I need to explain more about her background relationship with Lissa and Alex? And give more about the main character herself?

I love it! Your story is a show stopper. I toiled me in. And frankly I feel embarrassed because I was supposed to critique some othe people but I didn't. A little grammar erros, and you jump the gun a bit on events, slow it down and extend the chapter on who the character is and situation.

Haii can u fan back???? It would mean a lot to me thankssss!!!

@imafreakingnarwhal im ready for school with my night fury, Silvenia!

@ShanasBananas everyone loves icecream :)

@imafreakingnarwhal lol

I love your nyan cat background so cute :3