kiwisaregreen

…i have in my tbr (just on wattpad) 78 books…how in the world did that happen….….help

kiwisaregreen

55 books that i have read…that i saved
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cloudsinhercup

i know you don't know me but i'm begging you to read the first chapter of WE WHO ARE EATEN
          
          it's a dark fantasy about a marriage that's already breaking, a queen with a secret mission, and a bastard brother who cannot be bound by anything
          
          the prose is unhinged in the best way
          
          just the prologue and first chapter. if you hate it i'll never bother you again
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/378348546?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=indig0jesse

AxolotlLover137

Hey! I just read your Saja boys poly book, and wanted to write about some ideas. I’m so sorry if I’m disturbing your night/day.
          
          First- maybe give a moment where gwi-ma starts speaking to her in her head, making her go full demon mode and having a panic attack/mental breakdown, while the boys are out. 
          Second- give her a sensitive spot, maybe? Like a scar she won’t let them touch. Let’s make readers weep.
          Third- I LOVE the smut idea. I saw a lot saying you should do a poly one, and I’d love to give extra ideas for how to write that (if you’d want)
          Fourth- maybe have a giant fight happen? I’ve got more ideas whenever you want, if you want

AxolotlLover137

Ofc!!!
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kiwisaregreen

@AxolotlLover137 ok thx so much ill see what i can do
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AxolotlLover137

Oh of course! 
            I was thinking it could be because someone kept prying at her, not exactly sure who yet, but they kept trying to dig into her past and secrets and such. Like I said, if you wanted, a scar or something she refuses to let anyone touch/see or even speak about. It could be some trauma that happened with her dad, or smth else. Like a death of a dear friend or sibling that she blamed herself, and the scar reminds her of it. Otherwise, for the fight, if you don’t do that, it could be that she’s drifting away. I feel like maybe it would be best if it was either Baby, Abby, or Jinu who is in the fight. Maybe all three, even. I feel like maybe Mystery and Romance would be on Marra’s side.
            
            Anyways, if you need anymore ideas or details, I can always come up with more!
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