LaraPalms
I just finished reading Mute Love. I am probably older than a lot of your readers. I left some comments throughout your story. I used do some writing of my own. Life got in the way and I stopped. I want you to know you are very talented. Keep writing. It was excellant. You biggest issue is you need a proofreader and an editor. You get in a hurry and miss words. Sometimes there might be better ways to word a sentence. Those are technical things, however, they have nothing to do with the way you as an author understand the characters that you bring to life. How you let those characters tell you what they need to express. As authors the characters are our children we give birth to them and they tell us how they will grow. Writers block comes when we try to tell them what to do versus what they have in mind for themselves. Rule number 1 Once the character is created sit back and enjoy the rollercoaster ride it may be a wild one but it will be like no other. Rule number 2 Don't pay any attention to those who speak negatively. They have no idea what your character has to say to you or the world. So they have no say in the matter. Rule number 3 Be proud to speak for them. It makes you special. Thank. You for listening. Thank you for sharing an awesome ride with me. I hope you not I'll any more.
klancexoxo
Firstly, thank you. I wrote every chapter in ‘Muted love.’ During a period where I wasn’t sleeping correctly! and the fact I’m almost twenty now, and engaged! I haven’t had time to edit..I am proud of the story but I do know it needs some grammar fixes and a few story line changes. But..I’m actually a writer now but thank you For the tips! I loved reading every comment I try to edit but you know life does get in the way. Btw I don’t take negativity seriously if someone doesn’t like it I’m not forcing them to read it, that’s my outlook on it! But how I view my characters they are me so instead of them telling me what I need to express..I am. Every loveable part of this story, every pain word had been spoken to me in some shape or form. But I choose to express it through making a happier ending. Thank you for your amazing comments cause I do read them all, I enjoy criticism but do know I was probably in stage a week of no sleep during the start of this book lol. I’ll try editing but I make physical books now. So will see.
