Hey , can you read the story of mine and give me your honest feedback on it , please
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/385257835?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=justingame44

Thanks for adding my book to your reading list! :)

Hey so my first book Isn’t going well the draft keep looking worse and worse I don’t know really know what I’m doing wrong Also there is a book I really want to make with the way that going  I don’t know if I should make it any advice I can get?

Thanks for adding my book to your reading list! :)