yannieandres

hi co-writers/readers, if you’re looking for a slow-burn story with mystery, emotional tension, hidden pasts, and the kind of connection that feels impossible to explain... maybe give this one a chance ☔
          
          “When You Found Me” is a story about heartbreak, fate, and two people whose lives seem connected in ways they don’t fully understand yet.
          
          currently on going ✨
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/91264323?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=jasyannie
          
          thank you so much! ♡

kyazukiiiTG

Hieee km square hope you are doing great!
          I like to add some suggestions for you and best thing i like about your story <3
          Mmm Okay so I loved how you make small, ordinary moments feel so emotional Your way of showing young love is super touching. Maybe vary pacing a bit and mix shorter sentences to make some parts hit harder. Overall, your writing really stays with me powerful stuff <3 <3 <3