kmsquare2

Hieee km square hope you are doing great!
          I like to add some suggestions for you and best thing i like about your story <3
          Mmm Okay so I loved how you make small, ordinary moments feel so emotional Your way of showing young love is super touching. Maybe vary pacing a bit and mix shorter sentences to make some parts hit harder. Overall, your writing really stays with me powerful stuff <3 <3 <3