kmxoxoxo

I'm so quite here on Wattpad lately. But i haven't missed the big 100k The Alliance has hit. I have read every single comment left on this book and can't still wrap my mind around the fact that so many have enjoyed my writing. This book requires a lot of editing, which I will now be doing very soon. Once again, thank you so much.

authorprin157

Sorry author for posting it here without your permission.
          
          
          Hey!guys check out my new book I’m a new author I want to introduce my first story- our destiny:the saga of love,trust and emotions(18+)………..give your views to it
          
          This is a story of 3 couple
          
          Veer shekhawat×Ruhi verma
          Karan rathod×shreya kapoor
          Arjun Aggarwal×adriti singhania 
          
          
          
          Ruhi Verma: a 25 year old girl, a cardiologist and an orphan she was a bubbly girl until one night that changed her life.she wanted a loving,caring partner. God has some other plans for her.
          
          
          Veer shekhawat: 28 year old businessman,he has everything in his life but doesn't want to marry anyone and is womanizer. he has a cold demeanour 
            
          despite having handsome and charming smile is uninterested in relationship 
          
          
          There life changed completely on that night when they become one unaware of their future together
          
          what will happen when they meet each other at their friends wedding.will this encounter change their life ?
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          Adriti and Arjun were business rivals who hate each other. What will happen when they start to develop feelings for each other in their jealousy and hate?
          
          Shreya and Karan life chances when their eyes collided for the first time from that day she is his..but their life changes when he started to hate her and wanted revenge from her.
          
          
          Tropes:
          ceo×doctor 
          past secret
          age-gap
          Multiplecouple 
          single parent
          forced marriage
          Pregnancy
          Enemies to lover
          Forced marriage
          
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wordsandsweets

I just finished reading ur novel, the alliance and I really want to commend your work. I really enjoyed the book. I was hoping u could write another epilogue showing that Zayn was able to pull through and he was living happily with his family, at least, cancer can be managed right? I also think u need to show that his daughter got to know who her real mum is, it is only fair, what do u think? But then again, i must say u are really good. I really enjoyed reading ur book a lot. Kisses

Cassiopeia41

@kmxoxoxo  can the ending be about that she chooses neither but herself first. 
            I mean the falling in low with zayn was little bit fast and unpredictable. 
            I mean till now she was hung up on rizwan. 
            A little detail on zayns infidelity 
            He didn't explain that to aliyah. 
            It was only ayeshas narrative on that part. 
            So zayns clarification I think was needed. 
            I felt like all the emotions just changed in chap.. 
            
            I like this ending . 
            As it ends on a hope that zayn and aliyah believes that he will survive. Leave like that as there is no happily ever after but daily shares of both happiness and sadness.
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kmxoxoxo

Heyyy! Thank u for the lovely comment. U have a valid point, i look back at this book and i now know the ending is not what u’d expect. I maybe writing a new end to this book or a sequel! Thank u once again
• Balas

kmxoxoxo

I'm so quite here on Wattpad lately. But i haven't missed the big 100k The Alliance has hit. I have read every single comment left on this book and can't still wrap my mind around the fact that so many have enjoyed my writing. This book requires a lot of editing, which I will now be doing very soon. Once again, thank you so much.

Frenzy_Tt

Hey dear writer. Recently I just finished reading your book The Alliance and I must say it's a really very wonderful story but it could have had the utmost happiness if you would keep Zayn alive. I felt heartbroken when he was no more in Aliya's life. Come on, she already suffered a lot and don't you think she deserves the happiness after all this. I know the book is completed many days ago and I'm kinda exaggerating this things. But I couldn't help it after all I'm an avid fan of story books So instinctively it caught my attention. Umm...will you please reconsider my request and keep Zayn alive? You can rewrite the story or make some changes with this fact. Please don't take it offensive. It's just a request from a fan of your story's and its characters'.

kmxoxoxo

Hey, thanks for the feedback. It's so nice to hear back from my readers. I understand how the ending is slightly disappointing. It's different and unexpected, hence why i've ended the book there. Not everyone gets a happy ending and so i've gone for a realistic finish, which reflects on reality. Not all relationships last. But hey, i might write another story some day with a happy ending.
• Balas