silventescapade

Hi Kim! It wasn't really depressing but I've felt sad and was making a downcast gaze for the unprivileged who can never get the freedom and the things they want. Yeah, maybe you can divert the attention of your readers into something fun. Good luck and you're welcome. ;)

knightlynonsense

Haha yeah I understand :). I certainly do intend for the story to be more lighthearted when I bring the main character into it. The first part mainly served as a means for setting up the world the story was set in, granted it will obviously influence the course of the story itself. Thank you so much for commenting and your recommendations! It honestly means a lot to me. I always love other people's input in what I'm writing, as I believe it helps me grow as a writer to consider ideas that I might never have thought of. Hope you're having a great day :)
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