H_A_N_A_234
Hii! I saw your comment on my story(Not Again!!!) yesterday, when I re-read though my chapters I did find so, actually I have a request could you please help me with something.
H_A_N_A_234
@knjj727 from your comment I noticed that you a knack for pin pointing the problems, so I need your help me with that power of yours. I have another novel (the chronicles of Eldoria) I have written 8to9 chapters but the readers are not reading further. Could you please read first few chapters and tell me what's lacking. And my writing style there is different from not again so...
