knotanumber

I'm looking for hard-nosed reviewers to rip apart my latest story-in-progress. If interested: https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/296868448-knot-worthy-reviews

knotanumber

@Somerschool Funny you should ask that. "Are physical handicaps really a detriment in space?" That's the question that first tickled my mind and got me started on the project. In fact, space could be very liberating to a handicap person. After all, it doesn't matter if you have thin bones or no legs in zero gravity. But there's still that perception of being handicapped and all the coping mechanisms, sense of loss, and bitterness that hang on. That felt like fertile ground for exploring... The rest of the crew is introduced in the next chapter and start getting fleshed out from there. If you're up for reviewing more, fire away! Naturally, I'll take a swing at any of yours. I wouldn't want it to be a one-way street.
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Somerschool

So—I have been thinking more about the premise of the High Five. At first glance, it makes perfect sense. But then I begin wondering—not EVERY handicap is compounded by gravity. Are your other four characters merely handicapped, or handicapped in a way that zero G benefits them?
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"Love Me Tomorrow: 4 Roses" es una historia de amor y arrepentimiento, narrada por un hombre que ha cometido muchos errores con la mujer de su vida, y que quiere recuperarla. A través de cuatro capítulos, cada uno dedicado a una rosa de diferente color, el autor le confiesa sus sentimientos, le pide perdón, y le expresa su esperanza. Es un libro emotivo, sincero, y conmovedor, que refleja el dolor y el anhelo de un amor que no se rinde. Porfavorrrr denle una oportunidad a este pobre y trite escritor 
          
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