kobakkc113

New chapter for BROKEN TOYS 'The Boy Savior' coming soon. And in preperation for it's coming release I'd love to hear about what aspects of the book you enjoyed upon first read. Whether it be Jinx and Jax or something else.

BC18990

@kobakkc113 In the next chapter it's three things really, the more indepth/emotional reunion between Jax and Jinx were they find out what each other been up to how they've changed these last 8 years. The confrontation between Jax and Silco (if Jinx brings him along when she confronts him over Vi returning). Finally the new conflict between Jax and Ekko since by my count Jax has killed three firelights even if that was in self defense. Knowing season 1 Ekko he will deny that as their leader he's partially responsible for their deaths, since from Jaxs pov masked thugs attacked him and his loved ones unprovoked with lethal intent since they were carrying swords, hooks, spears etc. What was he supposed to do exercise restraint, give them a massage? As for season 2 I can definitely see Jax being on Caits shitlist (if he isn't already) along with Jinx (whether he helped fire the rocket at the council or stood next to her and let her do it), however even after Isha comes into the picture I can see him actively trying to liberate zaun without much encouragement/motivation like Jinx needed. Anyway can't wait to read what come up with in the next chapter!
Reply

kobakkc113

@Just5had0w @BC18990 I know it's a little early, but which part of the coming chapters are you looking forward too most? 
          	  
          	  And what are your predictions for Act 3 (season 2) of Broken Toys?
Reply

BC18990

@kobakkc113 Probably the dream/hallucination at the end of act 1 and when Jax is attacking Silcos factory in act 2.
Reply

kobakkc113

New chapter for BROKEN TOYS 'The Boy Savior' coming soon. And in preperation for it's coming release I'd love to hear about what aspects of the book you enjoyed upon first read. Whether it be Jinx and Jax or something else.

BC18990

@kobakkc113 In the next chapter it's three things really, the more indepth/emotional reunion between Jax and Jinx were they find out what each other been up to how they've changed these last 8 years. The confrontation between Jax and Silco (if Jinx brings him along when she confronts him over Vi returning). Finally the new conflict between Jax and Ekko since by my count Jax has killed three firelights even if that was in self defense. Knowing season 1 Ekko he will deny that as their leader he's partially responsible for their deaths, since from Jaxs pov masked thugs attacked him and his loved ones unprovoked with lethal intent since they were carrying swords, hooks, spears etc. What was he supposed to do exercise restraint, give them a massage? As for season 2 I can definitely see Jax being on Caits shitlist (if he isn't already) along with Jinx (whether he helped fire the rocket at the council or stood next to her and let her do it), however even after Isha comes into the picture I can see him actively trying to liberate zaun without much encouragement/motivation like Jinx needed. Anyway can't wait to read what come up with in the next chapter!
Reply

kobakkc113

@Just5had0w @BC18990 I know it's a little early, but which part of the coming chapters are you looking forward too most? 
            
            And what are your predictions for Act 3 (season 2) of Broken Toys?
Reply

BC18990

@kobakkc113 Probably the dream/hallucination at the end of act 1 and when Jax is attacking Silcos factory in act 2.
Reply

kobakkc113

Sorry about the lack of uploads the last month or so. Been incredibly busy for a while now, but rest assured the new chapter for Broken Toys is almost complete. Then onto writing another for The Ties That Bind.

BC18990

@kobakkc113 As happy as I am that broken toys is returning after all this time and that it's still a Jax and Jinx slow burn, don't burn yourself out writing stories for us. The quality of your stories speaks for itself so take all the time you need, no reason to rush at your expense.
Reply

kobakkc113

Last announcement for a while until Broken Toys revival.
          
          Yeah... I'm re-writing parts of what I've completed for the coming chapter of Broken Toys. Was rummaging through the literal pages of notes I have on this book and came to my final decision... 
          
          To put it simply, with the context of the second season and coming events, Jax/Vi won't work.
          
          Sorry for those of you who wanted it. It seemed like a good idea before anyone really suggested it, coming back into this book. But after many struggled writing sessions to say the least, for me it not only betrays Jax's character as a whole. And paired with the themes of the story I'm looking to tell, it negates everything that's been built up. Especially the bond shared between Jinx and Jax which will be an even more major focus come season 2.
          
          Plus in the next chapter 'The Boy Savior' two drastic events occur that pretty much define not only Jinx, but Jax as well and how Vi and especially Caitlyn will perceive him and the people they've become.

Just5had0w

@kobakkc113 let's go. Good jinx/oc storys are so rare
Reply

DaltonAtkinson

@kobakkc113 do what you got to do, man just make time to rest k
Reply

kobakkc113

Announcemenr for those reading BROKEN TOYS...
          
          A few of you have been asking whether or not this is a Jinx x Jax book or a Vi x Jax. Not that I blame you to be honest.
          
          But after having written more than half the coming chapter and with the context of season 2. I have decided this book will be shifting to Vi/Jax. The ending of "The Boy Savior" will pretty much solidfiy that.
          
          Feel free to let me know what you think...

ChampagneWitNoCham

I genuinely don't think a love interest has to exist, and if you go with a Jax vi relationship I'm worried because this book seemed like it would be the first one where the mc followed Jinx the genuine love Jax and Jinx have for each other that you created will be more infinitely more profound than any romance you conjure for any girl in the show
Reply

ChampagneWitNoCham

@kobakkc113 I was hoping for no romance with anyone. A romance with with Caitlyn wouldn't make any sense cuz of how anti topside Jax, Powder/Jinx was obviously a more brother and sister relationship, and a Jax/Vi relationship really doesnt make any sense because it just doesn't fit there dynamic and I know it's your character that you created, but Jax romance just seems really out of character and forced solely for the sake of having a love interest
Reply

kobakkc113

Making good progress on the next chapter for Broken Toys. Hopefully you'll all enjoy the direction I've decided to take with Jinx and Jax.

kobakkc113

@TorenRivers A few people have brought this up to me now. At first I wasn't sure how i'd weave it into the plot. 
            
            But I think I've figured something out. So yes, after the coming chapter this book will shift to be Vi x male oc.
Reply

TorenRivers

So is vi or jinx the love interest? I feel like vi would work best and there isn’t a lot of vi x male of stories I feel like that might get a lot more people to read but it’s up to you? 
Reply

kobakkc113

Okay, question in regards to BROKEN TOYS. One of the reasons I have up on writing it was the sheer length of each chapter. I didn't have a lot of time to write then and I certainly don't have enough time now. So I was wondering, should I solely focus on Jax's POV or keep doing what I've done for the last lot of chapters and focus on all characters.

ChampagneWitNoCham

@kobakkc113 I Liked the format of having everyone's pov because of how for me it made Jax feel more ingrained into the universe and more connected with the show, but if it's a matter of convenience for you than one pov wouldn't harm anything
Reply

Just5had0w

@kobakkc113 all characters. It's just way more interesting that way
Reply

SebastianVidalMarcha

You should focus on Jax,  we’ve watched the show so we know what’s happening with the other characters 
Reply