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kohaneisthebest
Apr 05, 2023 03:07AM
I just posted my first story. There is more to come, but I want some criticism on these two parts plsView all Conversations
Story by lily richards
pabón x salcedo
This is my first story so I would like some criticism but don't be dicks about it. Thank you. Also there's mo...