konanfroggo

I'm currently working on another chapter of "Sunflower" and I'm being so delusional right now:
          	
          	"Y/N!" I heard someone calling out my name, I turned around and saw Tom running towards me with a smile
          	
          	He then picks me up and twirls me around.
          	
          	"Tom! What's up with you today?" I laughed
          	
          	"Nothing. I'm just really happy to see you," he says beaming
          	
          	"I just saw you a couple hours ago,"
          	
          	"I know, I know, but you know me," he says putting me down "I'm just so in love with you,"
          	
          	HELP, this is kind of out of character ;-;

FictionGirl250

@konanfroggo Maybe he tried a happy potion, lol 
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h1xxsa

Hello dear writer, how are you?, I am here to ask permission to translate your story into Arabic, I found it wonderful and I want a large number of people to read it, I will put all your rights on it.
          
          Waiting for your approval♡♡.

h1xxsa

@konanfroggo I wanted to ask you if I could give her a name, if you don't agree, that's fine.
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h1xxsa

@konanfroggo Thank you very much:) and don't worry, I will put your rights at the end of each chapter 
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konanfroggo

@h1xxsa Hi! I see no problem with you translating. Just make sure you give me credit in the summary and each chapter you write!
            Looking forward to it :)
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konanfroggo

I'm currently working on another chapter of "Sunflower" and I'm being so delusional right now:
          
          "Y/N!" I heard someone calling out my name, I turned around and saw Tom running towards me with a smile
          
          He then picks me up and twirls me around.
          
          "Tom! What's up with you today?" I laughed
          
          "Nothing. I'm just really happy to see you," he says beaming
          
          "I just saw you a couple hours ago,"
          
          "I know, I know, but you know me," he says putting me down "I'm just so in love with you,"
          
          HELP, this is kind of out of character ;-;

FictionGirl250

@konanfroggo Maybe he tried a happy potion, lol 
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saradautchiha36

Dear auther, i would like to know why my story isn't getting any new readers even though i work hard on it . 
          
          Please can you check it out and tell me what's wrong with?
          
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/330098352?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=saradautchiha36

konanfroggo

@saradautchiha36 Hi! My advice is to just wait and see, I didn't start with a lot of readers either. But I have a few suggestions:
            - Add more tags
            - Try to stay consistent with your writing style and layout as sometimes when writing a full sentence you change between lowercase and uppercase letters
            - Try highlighting the POV changes to make them noticeable, use bold or underline
            - For location or time changes, format them so it's in the middle of the page, so readers can understand 
            Formatting is really important in your stories because it makes them clearer and easier to read. I find that cleaner formats keep me reading a story. Overall don't add too many things at once, if you want to add extra things (that aren't part of the story as of the moment) add it at the end and make it noticeable. Hope this helps :)
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konanfroggo

Hi everyone! Sorry that I've been inactive lately, I've been busy with other things. Luckily there's going to be a new chapter of "Yours Truly" on Friday at 11 am (PST). I will start posting a new chapter of "Sunflower" in the next month or two. Unfortunately, the stories that I did not mention will be currently listed as discontinued, but just temporarily until I get back into the groove. Thank you everyone for being so patient :)

Breanna_4819

GRACIAS MI POOKIE
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mindy_writing

Hey just wanted to let you know that I think someone copied your book Jerk. I've only read a few chapters of your book but the book that I think is a copy is not word for word but it's very similar to your's. If you wanna know the book you can ask me just thought I'd let you know.