JamsDelivery

Hello! I was actually wondering if you wanted to receive any critism for your story. Don't get me wrong! Your story idea and the plot is good, but your writing skills need a tad bit of work. You rush the story too much to the point where the mc meets jungkook on the first chapter and is already 4 months pregnant by the other. Again, don't get me wrong. I am nobody to judge you or your story but I thought that a little bit of editing on your story would be nice.