korielyn

The Submission series is finally over. 
          	
          	The last few years have not been easy for me. There are things that I had to recover from, and I still am. And I simply didn't have the energy or the motivation to do anything at all. All I did was force myself. 
          	
          	But today, as I am writing this post, I am honestly amazed that I managed to finish the book Submitting. Writing used to excite me as well as every feedback left for my books but like I said, I stopped feeling those things. 
          	
          	The only reason why I managed to finish this book is because all of you supported me, pushed me and kept reminding me of this part of myself. You didn't let me forget. And for that I am thankful. 
          	
          	Thank you.
          	
          	I want to write more. And next time I promise I will not upload 1 chapter in a month. 
          	
          	Stay safe and take care of yourself.
          	
          	Thanks,
          	Korielyn
          	
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ariaa156

@korielyn :( Even though you said you have no motivation left for the writing you yet still implied you didn't give up on writing. I hope you get excited to write again too, since I loved the book even with its flaws. Especially book one, because even with its flaws (which require polishing to make it even better) the only thing that kept me going through the book one is ur mystery, thrilling plot, and how well u have developed it to the next book which was unfortunately lagged a bit in the late middle and severely rushed by the end knowing nothing along with plot inconsistency with book one and itself and sudden change in characters (But the writing at the end is so damn good). Even though you said that submission series is over, the book was not marked completed yet, and I hope it's because you yourself don't believe it's the end because it  isn't, not with things that are still to be unveiled or I believe what you originally wanted to write when you were excited to write, the story you wanted to unfold. Been following you for a long time. Hope you consider rewriting.
          	  Much love and take care.
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Merensetforever

@korielyn I do agree with others... I just can't come in terms with the abrupt ending when so much is there to tell! Ur book description promised so! The answers and everything u have planned. I have read book one and this countless times to piece together only to be revealed nothing at the end.. Please consider rewriting the story the way u have planned when u get back to the writing <3
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maleeta7

@korielyn Dear Author, 
          	  You write marvelously. M sure your current situation must have compelled you to write such a depressing ending but believe me you could have bring out a masterpiece if you wouldn't have  added so much of depressing tragic ending. 
          	  Dimitri was nice to her. Its still a mystery why, where and when he started obsessing Rose. His link to her childhood is still a mystery, the beautiful piano lessons left incomplete and how Liza got into all of this story and wat was Ivan's role are very much incomplete, confusing and antagonizing. 
          	  If focused well then this could me a tragic mystery romance. Rose loosing leg could have been added flavours to the twisted plot but you just ended it hurriedly. 
          	  I followed you so long cause you write so good. The description, the detail briefing is so admiring but damn you hurried in the end and gave a very tragic, depressing and unacceptable ending to a loved story. 
          	  Truly understand your lost motivation, at times we all do, I do but kindly reconsider rewriting your two masterpiece Dimitri and Rose. They don't deserve such horrible and depressing ending.
          	  Lots of love to you. 
          	  All the best"
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oliviaadmond

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karenbetts_12

Hi,
          I hope you don’t mind this message. I know I can’t help you with your writing, but I still wanted to reach out because I admire your storytelling abilities. I read one of your stories, and I loved it! As a concept artist, I have many ideas for artwork that could complement your book. I hope to hear back from you soon!
          Warmly,
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butterfly-67

Dear Author,
          Thank you for presenting a great novel series. Your talent and your word choices are remarkable as the novels are evident. I have been reading the novel since 2018 and waiting for you to finish the novels since 2020. The journey has finally ended. But like many others I also feel that the ending is not justified. There was so much more to discover. The sudden change in the plot makes the audience feel confused and robbed off. In future if you ever consider rewriting, please change some plot for the ending. We understand that it’s very hard to come with such complicated ideas and theory. So take time and if you also ever feel like something is still missing, please consider amending. 
          Ps- I loved your novel Chase and offline as well!
          
          Your reader
          Butterfly