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kpopforever

Dec 13, 2009 08:02PM

@topazfairy: Dear topazfairy,
          	                          the story is going to be in views from many characters thorughout the story. i actually already wrote all of stars so i will make the sequal longer.after uploading the rest of stars, the story will be less confusing. thx for being a fan.

kpopforever

Dec 13, 2009

@topazfairy: Dear topazfairy,
                                    the story is going to be in views from many characters thorughout the story. i actually already wrote all of stars so i will make the sequal longer.after uploading the rest of stars, the story will be less confusing. thx for being a fan.

topazfairy

Dec 13, 2009

okay so first and foremost thanks for becoming a fan and secondly I've read your story and I have to admit it's kind of confusing but I like it. It haas some great potential, however I think you should make your chapters longer and try to tie all the characters together a bit more. I do like I sadi like it though. Who's going to be the man character or are you just going to keep up with the different points of view the whole way through?