FriendsNeverSayBye

hi I found you on the poetry critique thread, and my private messaging working so... yeah
          
          I was wondering if you could critique my poem My Misplaced Heart from my collection Word of mouth, im unsure about it, and it would really help a lot! thanks :)

sbrizuela16

Hey, krabby_patti24 
          so my name is suzy and I recently posted a poem. it took a lot for me to do it. So if you could please take a look at it. Its called "But Still She Lives" 
          There is one other thing I have recently posted. its not a poem but if you could read that would be cool too.
          So thank you if you get the chance to read it.

ZovosXarro

Hello, Krabby_patti24! :P 
          
          I just recently joined this site so I could find people to critique/analyze/share thoughts on my poems. 
          
          Go ahead and choose whatever poem of mine that catches your interest the most; I'm eager to hear what you think! :)
          
          I've been on a few other sites for this, but for the most part so far, I've been largely ignored. It's kind of funny how many people post their stuff sites like this just to feel even more isolated from others when no ones appears to recognize their work; but hey, it's the fact that the individual's work is made available to begin with that counts, right? :P

krabby_patti24

Yeah, totally! I will, I've been really busy with school and I'm working on catching up on all of my critiques but I promise you I will get to you, sooner rather than later
            !
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