@DracoReh Yes I absolutely love it. It's awesome. The way you wrote it is phenomenal, you addressed all the write issues, showed character development of both Pramod & Susheela, you showed how they fell for each other & most importantly you showed their insecurities rather than making them perfect protaganist who know everything & have never failed or never had breakdowns & get everything right the first attempt or the ever forgiving 'MAHAANS' of Indian TV industry. It... It is what I wanted from the show... no it is better than what I wanted from the show. Just loved every element, every character & every emotion you wrote, like I was full fledged crying in the part where Sushi was remembering how dp & garima crushed her dream.
I just wanna tell you that you are awesome, you are beautiful, you can do it, you got it & even if you fail, is not the end. You'll clear your exams, get your dream collage, study, enjoy life and have a successful career.
All you need to do is Stay Focused, Work Hard & Have Faith (He knows the best, will do what's best for you & is always there for you )