kukukurisu

Sad news for those eager for my chapter; I won't post any till around the middle of February, when my exams are over.
          	
          	One other reason besides preparing for the exams would be the fact that I have 0 drafts/outlines written beyond Chapter 8. The story had become too compliced for me to write it without an outline, and more I do that, the more I will drag the story with unnecessary scenes
          	
          	My plan's to finish a good chunk for my outline and when February comes, I will have an easier time writing the fanfic

kukukurisu

Sad news for those eager for my chapter; I won't post any till around the middle of February, when my exams are over.
          
          One other reason besides preparing for the exams would be the fact that I have 0 drafts/outlines written beyond Chapter 8. The story had become too compliced for me to write it without an outline, and more I do that, the more I will drag the story with unnecessary scenes
          
          My plan's to finish a good chunk for my outline and when February comes, I will have an easier time writing the fanfic

kukukurisu

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Sometimes I feel like I'm the only one who understands any shit happening in my fanfic. Not that I blame anyone; the stuff inside my head often differs from what I type on the keyboard. It's as if a lot of proper context gets lost the more I'm typing on a binge.

TheDom26

Nah you’re fine
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kukukurisu

I've got a question related to the canon and the scene I'm currently writing, just to make sure. Does Ichinose know anything about Ayanokoji's bounty from Year 2 LN?

kukukurisu

@TheDom26 So basically she knows that Ayanokoji is in trouble, or at least used to, and now probably she thinks he's safe due to both Shiba and Tsuki leaving the school
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TheDom26

@COTE16357 the only time she could have is when Shiba caught her spying during the island arc but that’s later on
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kukukurisu

@COTE16357 Damn, and this scene focuses a lot on the relationship between her and the first (second in my fic) grade level. All I know is that Hosen's got a crush on her, which I'll definitely be using. The rest's stuff all made up by me, looks like.
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kukukurisu

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I'm thinking about rewriting this fanfic altogether and starting from zero all over again because nobody seems to be giving an actual shit about it the way things go now. I barely get any sort of feedback which adds more to the frustration, especially with the last chapter where I hinted at lots of different theories, yet still very few comments.
          
          But yeah I'm probably going back to my original plan on uploading here once I am fully done and satisfied with the story.
          
          So if you have any sort of feedback no matter how positive or negative, feel free to share your opinion here or comment on any chapter if it involves a certain part.

kukukurisu

@MikliR Oh, thank you so much! It's nice to see someone being in love with my fanfic this much. But even then, the more I get closer to writing all the mind games happening in the story, the harder is it to post each chapter here once I am done with it. I'm not planning on rewriting too much, of course, just making up some changes to enrich the story. The main one I'm planning, for instance, is for Sakayanagi to have withdrawn from the school and not remain. I think it makes more sense for the narrative I'm going for, and besides, I can't think much of how to give her relevance here.
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MikliR

@kukukurisu In my opinion, this fanfic is very good, it does not need to be rewritten, on the contrary, it needs to be developed even further, weaving intrigues and desires of secondary characters around the main character. For me, this is the best fanfic in recent years, so I sincerely hope to see its continuation)
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kukukurisu

Gonna take a long break from this fanfic and CoTE altogether because it's been living in my head rent free 24/7 for quite a while already, and I can't focus near as much on the much more important stuff happening in my life. I'm more than satisfied with how I introduced the cliffhanger from my last chapter, so there's that.

ZIZ-140

@kukukurisu Incorrect. I have your mother.
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kukukurisu

@ZIZ-140 Lack of maidens.
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ZIZ-140

@kukukurisu Skill issue.
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