hey its the author of the Alpha's little Luna. I really LOVE your book. It is really funny and I like the characters. OK so pointers.
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Yea ok, so first off The initials of MFWOD.
2# the summary. I like the first part of it, but at the end it gives a little too much detail which can point out an obvious ending to readers. My advice is to leave the reader guessing til the very last moment. Be creative( not that you aren't already, because trust me you are).
3# I love your story so far, I liked how it started and how you did not put the girls name,age, and stuff like that. My only advice is not to put so many POV's in a chapter. It can sometime confuse readers. That is unless it is a critical part of the book.
4# The character should not make it too obvious that they like each other, and try not to add too too many cliche moments, or feelings in them. Sometimes it is ok to do that, but not like all the time
5# Never forget to add details. Those are important, especially if your describing a location.
6# Make sure to update as frequently as possible. Lack of timely updating will cause a decrease in regular reader, I unfortunately know this from experience
7# Do as much spell check as possible
8# For, your first book, you are a very good writer. I enjoy it and will make sure to read it as you update it.
9# Dint worry or stress about your book to much, as you keep writing, you will increase you understanding and vocabulary of how to write. you will improve yourself and get better.
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Be calm. Stay awesome. And keep write.....no like seriously, never stop...... I m not joking, if you stop now, I am pretty sure the world will stop spinning
