fyrelily

Hey I would really luv to get your opinion on a story that I am writing...Esmeralda....if you get a free chance in between living life and writing your own story to take a look at it and tell me what you think I would really appreciate it....Thanxs :  )

serval

Hey, I know the­­­­­­­­­­­­­se are­ s­up­er­ a­nn­oy­in­g,­­ a­­nd­­ I­­'m­­ not gonna beg
          But I have this story called
          'An Albino On A­­­­­­­­­­­­­ Reali­ty­ S­ho­w.­. ­Wh­at­ c­­ould go wrong?'
          that I was hopi­­­­­­­­­­­­­ng you­ c­ou­ld­ t­ak­e ­a ­lo­­ok­­ a­­t ­­an­­d ­­give­­ my ­­some feedback!
          Thanks, I know ­­­­­­­­­­­­­these get annoying!
          (: