mmeyer90

In California, a driver facing a DUI crash that hospitalizes three minors, with one requiring brain surgery, faces a severe felony sentence ranging from 6 years to more than 20 years in state prison.
          
          Okay, I know this is fiction but I really want the state to make Tara pay. I want her to disappear/take a backseat to this story. I want her to not be released because I don’t want Gemma to kill her. (I didn’t like that storyline.) I really hated these 2 women in the later seasons; Tara 5-6 and her death was the reason for season 7 along with Gemma’s lies. Honestly, I wonder about Gemma dying instead. Maybe her heart gives out one night while sleeping? Sorry, I’m thinking out loud. Really loving your story!

kwrites_x

@mmeyer90 I understand, but there is a lot for and against her~~
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mmeyer90

@kwrites_x A bit disappointed, but I hope at least you’ll have her serve the whole time at least. Now I’m anxiously waiting for the next chapter and what everyone’s reaction is. Oh boy!
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kwrites_x

@mmeyer90 Nooo, I love the thinking out loud! I like to see how my story gets people's brain's working, which is why I love and encourage feedback & comments etc! Oh yeah, please don't do that while driving LMAO! 
            
            Please don't be too disappointed by Tara's sentencing time lol, I wasn't aware of the actual sentencing, I didn't do good enough research~~
            
            BUT it's still something, she's still serving time and paying the price for what she did!
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mmeyer90

          Musing on Gemma's seemingly omnipotent reach over Jax's life, In many ways you can see in hindsight that Jax could come to view her as the central antagonist in his life. When the picture becomes completely clear as to who his mom really is, he realizes the vast majority of the hardship that he endured through his journey in his life has in some parts, or exclusively, been created by her. It could be  a horrible epiphany for him. In the recent chapter, Gemma had to be hospitalized because of her heart. Did you ever think to kill Gemma off? I mean, maybe her heart gives out in her sleep and then create a world less chaotic because of her death and later Clay’s? Idk, I’m just thinking aloud. It’s been on my mind. Just thought I would see what you would think along that line - we’re in season 5 and later season 6/7. You could get even more creative with the storyline.

mmeyer90

Yes, it makes sense! You’re doing a beautiful job by the way - I saw that you wrote Tara driving high abd she took Erin’s car without permission and those poor kids! I’m on pins and needles waiting for the next chapter and for the hospital to call Jax and Erin. Oh boy! I don’t know how Tara will recover from this but right now, I’m on pins and needles. Poor Chibs, I hope he’ll be truthful about finding Tara high.
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kwrites_x

@mmeyer90 Honestly, I have SO MANY thoughts that go around my head while writing chapters -- I don't tend to plan ahead, not really. Some things I know are concrete like a certain chapter coming up, but others, I just plan as I write! I like the words and my brain to direct me in how this story goes, but also by changing storylines etc, it helps to navigate the story in it's own way anyway, compared to the TV show, if that makes sense?
            
            I can say, I have thought about killing Gemma; but as of right now in my story, she's not exactly the same as she is in the show, she's not competing for her son, she's not at war with Tara (Erin) -- she's just grandma, and stepping in as and when she's needed on club buisness etc! 
            
            Hope this all makes sense! Let me know! 
            
            Thank you so much for the message!!
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mmeyer90

What does Erin’s back look like? You mentioned in part 1 chapter 20, her scars were like a signature? There’s scar removal surgery - why hasn’t Erin tried that? I know it doesn’t get rid of it completely but maybe it can minimize scarring. Hey, I have a thought; there are scenes where you show Jax pov of looking, touching, kissing her scars, I love that. However did you ever do one of her back? A scene where Jax is showing Erin or maybe one night while she lay sleeping, we’re hearing his thoughts on her back scars? Idk, I know Erin is insecure a bit but maybe something that Jax shows Erin she doesn’t need to be insecure.

kwrites_x

@mmeyer90 Hellooo! If you go to Book 9 where the new book cover is posted, you can see part of her back scars. I imagine her back to be covered, she was subject to this horrific acts for YEARS at the hands of Elias, so I imagine her back is more or less scars than bare skin at this point. 
            
            I actually haven't thought about scar removal surgery, I think Erin wouldn't do it, because she's grown to accept what's on her back and it reminds her of what she came from, what she escaped and survived. It's her story, y'know?
            
            I do know in Book 1, Gemma sees Erin's back by mistake and that results in Erin eventually showing Jax, I went back and looked and Jax first saw her back scars at Chapter 14. But to him, the scars are part of her, though I don't mention it much in chapters, I imagine he always runs his hands over them, kisses them etc. They've become part of her and he loves every part, so though I don't type it much, he does interact with all her scars; whether that her wrists, back, stomach-- 
            
            Thank you for the message!! 
            
            Maybe I could do more of those?
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mmeyer90

You’re only on season 5 in book 10, are you going to write the next 2 seasons or something? I would like to read Erin and Jax getting a happily ever after. Please don’t bring in Colette or that dirty cop! I hated that storyline and I don’t want Erin to end up in jail. I’m rewatching  SOA and I’m just really not a big Tara fan - wish we had your Erin. Anyway, looking forward to the next update and seeing where your creative storytelling takes us!

kwrites_x

@mmeyer90 Hiiii! Thankyouuu!! I take story lines chapter at a time LMAO, I change mid sentence or chapter, sometimes I do stuff and have to go back to certain chapters and tweak what I've already posted AHAH! 
            
            thankyou so much for being so supportive!!!
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mmeyer90

I’m all caught up and now it’s a waiting game! That’s the hard part so I may have to go back and re-read it again however when you post a new chapter, I’ll have to read it again. I I LOVE your storyline! Honestly the best ever!

kwrites_x

@mmeyer90 YOU DID AMAZING!!! Thankyou so much for reading it all!!! dont worry, i'll be posting several chapters daily!!✨️✨️✨️ 
            
            its a long story, 10 books, but its big, its detailed, highs, lows, greys, soa, its HUGE
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eclipse_1994

Hi, I can’t wait to read your Sons of Anarchy story. But I have a question who is the love interest if there’s one

eclipse_1994

Thank you, I just wanted to make sure I’m adding it to the right reading list
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kwrites_x

@eclipse_1994 It's O/C x Jax. :)
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Kchase1995

hey, I just need to know does he ever cheat on her as I hate cheaters?

kwrites_x

@Kchase1995 hellooo! no, they do split on and off, that's when they both sleep with other people, but no, he doesn't physically cheat on her, but at some points emotionally/mentally??? im not sure how far into the story you are, I dont want to spoil anything~~
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zeppelinklueren

This is so truly amazing, just found this by a complete accident and im astonished by the amount of work put into all of this! I just finished Sons of Anarchy a few months ago and i loved it so much which inspired me to write my own thing, but this here is real ambition. I genuinely couldn’t believe my eyes when i saw the 200 chapters and than seconds later i see the „Book number 7“?! It sounded utterly ridiculous but i just went to the first book and started reading into it and i am so genuinely impressed. I love this i really don’t know how to put it all into words. I hope you have had, are having and will keep having an amazing time with this work!

kwrites_x

@clownxdor Hellooo! This is so kind, thank you so much!! I hope you enjoy writing your story just as much! Have fun with it, make the world your own!✨✨
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