kxxtieee

hello! question here.
          	i really don't like the beginning chapters of this book and feels like it turns people away from wanting to read more of the book?
          	
          	should i re-write them?
          	like keep the same-ish storyline just improve it?
          	
          	it would probably be a separate book but with 'revamped' in the title. 
          	
          	please let me know! if there's any thing i'd want you to comment on the most, it would be this.
          	
          	i'm really conflicted and have no idea what to do :/
          	
          	bye my lovelies
          	
          	~ Katie

kxxtieee

I’m not really sure tbh. At the moment I’ve just got the revamped chapters in my notes. I’d either just keep updating the new one or delete all the chapters and paste the new ones in all at once (I’m leaning more towards pasting them all in option)
• Reply

sam_to_the_slaughter

Hmmm... Well just keep in mind that I kept reading and read it all in one night, so I am sure more people have too. But your the author so it is all your decision. I don’t think you should write another book, it would be kinda annoying with the notifications. If you did the revamped decision, would you keep updating that one, or the original?
• Reply

kxxtieee

hello! question here.
          i really don't like the beginning chapters of this book and feels like it turns people away from wanting to read more of the book?
          
          should i re-write them?
          like keep the same-ish storyline just improve it?
          
          it would probably be a separate book but with 'revamped' in the title. 
          
          please let me know! if there's any thing i'd want you to comment on the most, it would be this.
          
          i'm really conflicted and have no idea what to do :/
          
          bye my lovelies
          
          ~ Katie

kxxtieee

I’m not really sure tbh. At the moment I’ve just got the revamped chapters in my notes. I’d either just keep updating the new one or delete all the chapters and paste the new ones in all at once (I’m leaning more towards pasting them all in option)
• Reply

sam_to_the_slaughter

Hmmm... Well just keep in mind that I kept reading and read it all in one night, so I am sure more people have too. But your the author so it is all your decision. I don’t think you should write another book, it would be kinda annoying with the notifications. If you did the revamped decision, would you keep updating that one, or the original?
• Reply

kxxtieee

jeez, i used to think 500 words was a lot when i wrote my first few chapters. i wish 500 words was long. i hate the older chapters in my book. it’s so cringy. maybe i should re-write them? lemme know if i should.

kxxtieee

I MADE IT HOME SAFE LADS, LASSIES AND OTHERS. MAKE SURE TO STAY SAFE. IF YOU DON’T sTAY SAFE OR I’LL KNOCK YOU OUT. PROMISE. I NORMALLY START WRITING ABOUT 4/5 DAYS AFTER A RELEASE BUT I’VE GOT ABOUT 300 WORDS DOWN SO FAR IN AN HOUR WITH A FEW BREAKS WHEN I WAS ON ONE OF MY FLIGHTS. THINK IM GONNA AIM FOR ABOUT 2000-2500 WORDS W/O THE a/N WOOOOOOOOOO LOVE YOU ALL  
          
          
          ~ Katie

kxxtieee

HELLO MY LOVELIES, SORRY I HAVENT UPDATED IM ON HOLIDAY. I’VE GOT 6 DAYS LEFT IN THE SUNSHINE STATE OF FLORIDA. ONCE I’VE UNPACKED I’LL REPLY TO COMMENTS. UPDATE SOON, PERFECTING THE CHAPTER LOVE YOU LOT. WOOOOOOOOOOOO.

kxxtieee

Damnn. I think most of my vacations are like two weeks long since we only go once a year. I’m spending 6 more days here so in total I’ll have been here 2 weeks.
• Reply

Annaisalright

I live in the south and this made me realize that people that aren’t from the southeast actually take long vacations in Florida, like I’m 5 hours away and I haven’t spent longer than 4 days there
• Reply