Niti_Ink

Hi,
          Can you please read only 1 or 2 chapters of this book and continue only if you like it but do give it a chance....i promise you won't regret it....
          
          Aap... yahan?"
          He stopped just inches away.
          Too close.
          Their breaths tangled. Her heart pounded in her ears.
          " Akhirkar 6 mahine ki aankh micholi ke baad aap samne he mere..."
          "Pahli mulakat yaadgar honi chahiye na jaan...
          (leaning in, lips almost touching hers) please don't stop me..."
          The first brush of his lips against hers was gentle, almost too gentle for the intensity between them. But the moment he felt the warmth of her lips, the floodgates opened. The kiss deepened - demanding, possessive, and yet tender, as though he was trying to memorize every sensation.
          Once he finds her breathless, he left her lips with a pop sound and move little away just to see her now ruined lipstick and flushed chics...
          "Roshni...Tum meri ho..."
          "Rudra... I..."
          
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_lostgirlll_10

Why are you barking there gurl?? Because I can't reply because your so called author has blocked me???

_lostgirlll_10

@_lostgirlll_10 Laudi jaise harkaten teri hai
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kya7re7chikne9

@_lostgirlll_10 chl nikl laudi m bhi terko block krti hu kon terse behs krega byeeeeeeeeeeeee
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_lostgirlll_10

And also, your author copies a lot from other books
          Not even inspiration, direct line to line
          
          I didn't say it there because I didn't want to make her feel bad but honestly, she deserves honest criticism

_lostgirlll_10

@_lostgirlll_10 you are the one who's dumb here, a dumbshit tale of that author. And no this line is not common *clown*
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kya7re7chikne9

this message may be offensive 
@_lostgirlll_10 if u really think that this is a copied dialogue that no one is dumb than u bcz some dialogues are go to in every books like "I can die for you" "i belong to you" etc are common dialogue and you will find it in any other book so it can't be copied (clown emoji) don't act dumb
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_lostgirlll_10

@_lostgirlll_10 *clone emoji* poori comment padh ullu, and the whole dialogue "i belong to you and no other woman can look at me" that whole line was copied from other book just modified 
            
            I won't mention book name here because I'm not gawar like you, i respected her but she truly didn't deserve it
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_lostgirlll_10

Chut*ya tu he uss author ki chamchi , and now that insecure wannabe author has blocked because I just gave my opinion so I'm replying here 
          Bkl as a bonus gaali rakhle

kya7re7chikne9

@_lostgirlll_10 lolll lolll lollllll lodi
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_lostgirlll_10

@kya7re7chikne9 wasn't he behaving coldly at anaya's bubbly behaviour, just chuckled once doesn't make the difference 
            
            He was ignoring her plea even 
            And again saying loll lolll won't make you cool
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kya7re7chikne9

@_lostgirlll_10 are for real????damnnnn i want to laugh bcz Nothing like this happened in this chapter in fact he was jst opposite like he used to be
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payalsagmalani1234

Hey can you tell me how do I change my name here from real to something else

kya7re7chikne9

@payalsagmalani1234 @payalsagmalani1234 u have to go to the setting icon which is just above ur main profile and then go to the "profile and account" and from there u can tap on "full name" option and from there u can change ur name.
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