Kya Sully

U should write another story in the mean time 

I have a question where is Shadow going when he left 

@kyasully You are an amazing writer and and I really enjoyed your Ashes of Innocence a lot!
            
            I'll be looking forward to reading your Ashes of Innocence 2 in Spring 2027 when Sonic Movie 4 comes out
            
            And keep up your great work on your writings!

@kyasully I'm really proud of you, and I'll miss reading more of your Sonic Movie story 
            
            I was thinking maybe for the last few chapters before we reach the ending where we meet Amy and Metal Sonic for Sonic Movie 4 in Spring 2027
            
            1.) Of Shadow trying to figure out where he came and needed to go on a journey to find answers out there, much to everyone's shock
            
            Mabel, in tears, becomes worried that he's going to leave her just like her parents did, but Shadow promises her that he'll never abandon (her like her parents did), and he'll return someday
            She gives him a little family group of all of them together (so Shadow wouldn't forget about his new family), and Shadow gives her a bracelet that Maria used to wear 
            
            2.) Mabel and Shadow have their last night together by dancing together, playing the guitar, and looking at the stars (and the broken Moon) before Shadow leaves the next morning before he saids good to everyone and promises everyone (most importantly Mabel) that he will return someday
            
            Shadow and Mabel share their last goodbye    as Shadow promises her that he's still there for her no matter how far apart they'll be, and he'll return whenever he find answers
            
            3.) In an epilogue, everyone is camping together, Team Sonic race together (with Mabel holds to a rope attached to Sonic for a speedy ride) before Sonic accidentally drags himself and Mabel to New York
            And then Metal Sonic makes an appearance to attack them before they were saved by Amy Rose
            
            What do you think?
            
            Also:
            
            Jeff Fowler was planning to make a Shadow spin-off TV show or movie someday (if the third becomes successful, which it already did), and we'll see what happens 
            
            Sonic Movie 4 is in development now, and it'll be in theaters in Spring 2027

@kyasully And also maybe one adventure chapter where Team Sonic, Shadow, Ozzy and Mabel are racing in a forest before Mabel ends up getting lost before she accidentally stubble into a quicksand and gets stuck for a while for Team Sonic, Shadow and Ozzy finds her (thanks to Ozzy's sense of smell)
            While they're working together to pull Mabel out of the mud, it seems hopeless before Shadow decides to take off his rings and use his ultimate strength to help Team Sonic pull her out off the mud before he collapse in exhaustion
            
            At the end, now with Mabel safe, they've learned about Shadow's rings and why he had to wear them unless it's an emergency before Mabel expresses how lucky she is to have all of her brothers part of her life and alway there for her when she's in danger
            
            That's just an idea about more sibling bonds and how great Ozzy is too  

@kyasully Hmmmm.....I would like to see one chapter where Shadow tells his story about his friendship with Maria
            That would be a sweet moment of Shadow sharing his memories of Maria with her niece 
            And how both Maria and Mabel are so alike 

@kyasully Hi there. I really love the series and I can't wait to see more of it. As much as I love action I think maybe more family bonding would be nice, but see how it is with others indiividually. A chapter dedicated to the bond between Sonic and Mae and so on, :P
            
            Either way, you are doing a great job so far

I actually like this chapter, it’s really better than the end of chapter 59. And I’m really glad at this chapter that it was all just a dream. And I’m glad that everyone is okay during this chapter. Please leave this chapter posted, this is way better in the end.

Thank you! Ugh it’s gonna be hard to choose one of these ideas but I decide eventually. One more thing, in addition to the first scenario and with finding out that Shadow survived the explosion, I thought of him living with the Oc and the mother, since it makes sense that he would be with a family he knows of, and possibly lay low for a while just because he might not be ready to face Sonic and the others because of guilt and for hurting Tom. But he still has a home. Again thank you for your opinions! I’ll let you know what I decided to go with!

I absolutely love both ideas! They each bring something unique to your OC’s story while tying her into the world of Sonic in a compelling way.
            
            The first scenario adds an intriguing layer of mystery and secrecy. The idea that her mother was hidden away by Gerald, completely unknown to G.U.N., makes for an interesting twist. It also makes sense that her mother would want to distance herself from that past, only for her daughter to eventually cross paths with Shadow and uncover the truth. That revelation could be incredibly emotional and impactful, especially as she grapples with her identity as a Robotnik.
            
            That being said, idea two is amazing!! The emotional depth of your OC being an orphan, grieving her parents, and slowly finding a family again with Tom and Maddie is so heartfelt. The gradual trust-building and eventual adoption add so much weight to her story, making the moment she meets Sonic even more meaningful. There’s something really beautiful about her finding a new home and happiness before discovering her hidden heritage. It creates such a strong emotional foundation for her character.
            
            Both ideas are fantastic so far!! It’s just a matter of which one you’ll choose to work from

Hello, so so sorry for not getting back to your messages. I appreciate it them all!! Thank you so much, I’m glad you’re enjoying Ashes of Innocence

Also I’m huge fan of Shadow 

@kyasully I swear Shadow is going to take revenge for Mabel after someone attempted to kill her 

Yes there’s plenty more coming, just you wait for the court hearing!!