NaskoAndonovv

Hello, I read some of your works. To be completely honest I like them!!!
          But I think your talent may lay in writing a story. I am saying this not because I didn’t like your poetry or smth, its because I honestly feel like you will thrive in writing novels with your storytelling!!
          
          
          Also, I noticed the depressive tendencies and sh too, so if you need someone to talk to or someone just to listen I am here for you. 

kyjenn33

okay will make a story, but also could you give me some tips on how I can make a my poetry better?
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NaskoAndonovv

@kyjenn33 npp!!  And also you can always improve,  and ur poetry is actually pulling but I feel if you write a story it will pull like a black hole!!
            
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kyjenn33

aw that is really nice of you, and I really do think you are right about my writing I just love poetry so much and I wish that I could write a good poem that just pulls you in, like what your poems do for me
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