@kyndal_ryann Thank you so much! I'm very glad you liked it. Yeah, I noticed that I talked more about Jo and her thoughts, and I did actually want to add more of Laurie's. But the classic novel kind of focuses on Jo a lot, so it was quite hard for me to write in his perspective. Especially since he's a boy, and I'm not...
If you have any suggestions or edits to make, feel free to comment them! :D