kyophelia

Well, it appears my rewrite of the chapters I've done so far is complete. All I can say is it is soooo much better than the original material I wrote back in Feb. I added a lot more lore and characters that will reappear throughout the story.

kyophelia

Well, it appears my rewrite of the chapters I've done so far is complete. All I can say is it is soooo much better than the original material I wrote back in Feb. I added a lot more lore and characters that will reappear throughout the story.

kyophelia

I just published Chapter 3.  Thanks everyone who is reading it!  It honestly gives me the motivation to keep on writing!  I made a couple of changes to Chapter 2, including changing the character Jason's name to the weirdly spelled name Jayceon.  In any case, please feel free to comment what you think, and any suggestions you might have.  This project has absolutely captivated me and I cannot wait to see how it goes as I continue writing it!
          
          PS: sorry to whoever has the name Jayceon, I just called your name weirdly spelled!