kyoshiharusama2000

Hey guys!
          	So... I think I'm gonna change my plans for my post-apocalyptic fanfic Last Melody on Earth. 
          	
          	Lately, I've been feeling that the story doesn't make much sense anymore for a 21st-century nuclear war setting. Originally, I focused on human decisions leading to the apocalypse — but after introducing Koharu Seto (one of the post-nuclear survivors) and mentioning AM-like and Skynet-like rogue AIs, I realized the story's logic needs a serious overhaul.
          	
          	Having places like Hong Kong and other major cities in the Southern Hemisphere act as "safe havens" also started to feel unrealistic — it made the world seem too much like a pre-war fantasy. The whole thing was starting to feel like a mix of 1983 doomsday lore and Cold War geopolitics, which doesn't fit a digital-era apocalypse.
          	
          	So, I'm planning to rewrite the story to make Rogue AIs — similar to AM and Skynet — partly responsible for triggering the nuclear war, not just rogue human actors. That way, the Last Melody on Earth world will involve a full-blown AI takeover alongside the nuclear apocalypse.
          	
          	This update also opens up some awesome crossover potential — not just with other anime, S.T.A.L.K.E.R., Fallout, and Metro, but also I Have No Mouth, and I Must Scream and Terminator! . Plus, it will gives Karina Arima — the daughter of Eli Ayase and Kousei Arima — a stronger role as the fanfic's equivalent of John Connor.
          	
          	What do you guys think?
          	
          	Should I reboot the story completely or just rewrite some chapters to fit the Rogue AI takeover concept?

kyoshiharusama2000

Hey guys!
          So... I think I'm gonna change my plans for my post-apocalyptic fanfic Last Melody on Earth. 
          
          Lately, I've been feeling that the story doesn't make much sense anymore for a 21st-century nuclear war setting. Originally, I focused on human decisions leading to the apocalypse — but after introducing Koharu Seto (one of the post-nuclear survivors) and mentioning AM-like and Skynet-like rogue AIs, I realized the story's logic needs a serious overhaul.
          
          Having places like Hong Kong and other major cities in the Southern Hemisphere act as "safe havens" also started to feel unrealistic — it made the world seem too much like a pre-war fantasy. The whole thing was starting to feel like a mix of 1983 doomsday lore and Cold War geopolitics, which doesn't fit a digital-era apocalypse.
          
          So, I'm planning to rewrite the story to make Rogue AIs — similar to AM and Skynet — partly responsible for triggering the nuclear war, not just rogue human actors. That way, the Last Melody on Earth world will involve a full-blown AI takeover alongside the nuclear apocalypse.
          
          This update also opens up some awesome crossover potential — not just with other anime, S.T.A.L.K.E.R., Fallout, and Metro, but also I Have No Mouth, and I Must Scream and Terminator! . Plus, it will gives Karina Arima — the daughter of Eli Ayase and Kousei Arima — a stronger role as the fanfic's equivalent of John Connor.
          
          What do you guys think?
          
          Should I reboot the story completely or just rewrite some chapters to fit the Rogue AI takeover concept?

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Thanks You, Thanks for supporting my fanfic, what do you think?

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@ VOLQUIOS  tomorrow New chapter!!
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@ VOLQUIOS  thanks, I would really like you to comment on my Fanfic as you read, if it's not too much trouble, thank you.
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kyoshiharusama2000

Hey guys, Would you interested to read my Your Lie in April and Love Live Crossover Fanfiction called Last Melody on Earth.?
          
          Perhaps you can help me to improve it, because I'm still not perfect in writing and creating something.