Just wanted to say, I saw your comment on @knightsrachel 's page and it intrigued me. I can definitely relate to how you're feeling about you're book. I want you to know that I haven't read it fully but I really liked the first chapter. It was beautifully written and so simple. I'm not one to add incomplete books to my library so consider yourself a first. :) I really look forward to seeing what you create and how you progress, don't ever stop writing because from what I can tell, you have a talent. I'm quite picky when it comes to books, they have to be fluid grammatically, unique and original and also have to have a good cover and blurb, as well as a catching title. So far you've ticked all the boxes. One tip ; paragraphing. It will make everything look more professional, unless you are deliberately doing it for aesthetic. :)
