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Hey!  So I got through quite a bit of the story about the crazy town and house you lived in.  I like the journal entry style.  You have such an engaging style of writing that you are very convincing as the character with a strong voice.

I just posted the sample of what the story is. What should I add or take away? I want honest feedback.

Hey guys it might be a little while before I write another story. I'm working on something that will take up most of my writing time. I'll post it bit by bit.